Haiku

A syallble was missed. Good effort though. It's supposed to be 5-7-5, not 5-6-5.

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  • Steel_Ball_RunSteel_Ball_Run Posts: 473 ★★★
    Maybe change ‘best friends’ to ‘best of friends’
  • Or “Smashed” could be pronounced using a more formal, literary/poetic, or old English style, as..

    Smash'ed with separate annunciation on the “ed” portion.
  • Hammerbro_64Hammerbro_64 Posts: 7,247 ★★★★★

    Or “Smashed” could be pronounced using a more formal, literary/poetic, or old English style, as..

    Smash'ed with separate annunciation on the “ed” portion.

    This. Ed pronounced like Edward.
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