Iron Maiden

Scarcity27Scarcity27 Member Posts: 1,906 ★★★★★
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Iron Maiden


~Scarcity27


Mysterious maiden, cloaked in blood
Oh, tell the tale of your fate confined
Ruthless monarch, mystical blade
Now leave your mortal days behind
Iron tomb she wears, she bears
No soul she leaves unseized
Gruesome horrors await her foes
Sadistic revenge of this beast
Torrid wasteland, she sets ablaze
Abysmal energy she commands
Run, run, escape her sword
Terror consumes these empty lands
How can one survive her wrath?
Enemies of this entity flee
Masters of the sword unite
Years of silent pain set free
She nevers stops, never bleeds
Time has come for your demise
In Languria a boneyard beckons
Curses rain in a city of lies
Queen Haasen, your fury flows
Under the dusky red sun
Eternal fire, eternal snow
Every nightmare into one
No one survives, no one
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Hey,
I love writing poetry. It is just one of those things I feel like I was always meant to do. I love flowing words, the dynamic, the fine line between reality and fantasy I can create.
And I love to challenge myself.
So I decided to write a poem inspired by an MCOC character, namely : Morningstar
I haven't used her much, but I was inspired by @TheManMythLegend 's absolute obsession of her.
So this poem is sorta dedicated to him, I guess.

Hope you enjoyed

I know there is an extra line in the poem. I did this on purpose. Why? Well, read the first letter of every line
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Comments

  • RookiieRookiie Member Posts: 4,821 ★★★★★
    *snaps fingers*
    I got goosebumps man, you're brilliant
    Can you make one for Cosmic Ghost Rider?
  • The_Sentry06The_Sentry06 Member Posts: 7,787 ★★★★★
    edited February 2021
    Amazing! BRAVO!
  • SpideyFunkoSpideyFunko Member Posts: 21,942 ★★★★★

  • Scarcity27Scarcity27 Member Posts: 1,906 ★★★★★
    Thank you guys!
    Rookiie said:

    *snaps fingers*
    I got goosebumps man, you're brilliant
    Can you make one for Cosmic Ghost Rider?

    Will try next week...got my finals till Thursday
  • Silver_GooseSilver_Goose Member Posts: 488 ★★★
    Amazing poem...but Iron Maiden is also the name of a different marvel character. Although, to be honest, so is every other possible arrangement of words.
  • Sundance_2099Sundance_2099 Member Posts: 3,405 ★★★★★
    my first was the band, my second was the Quake II monster. :D
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  • World EaterWorld Eater Member Posts: 3,748 ★★★★★
    Thanks for sharing your “piece of mind” ;)
  • Hammerbro_64Hammerbro_64 Member Posts: 7,463 ★★★★★
    Scarcity27 said:

    Thank you guys!

    Rookiie said:

    *snaps fingers*
    I got goosebumps man, you're brilliant
    Can you make one for Cosmic Ghost Rider?

    Will try next week...got my finals till Thursday
    Nice poem! For sure focus hard on your finals though
  • GlassbackGlassback Member Posts: 641 ★★★
    Lovely acrostic mate!
  • SpideyFunkoSpideyFunko Member Posts: 21,942 ★★★★★
    Glassback said:

    Lovely acrostic mate!

    I didn’t even realize that
  • HeroBoltsyHeroBoltsy Member Posts: 785 ★★★
    Very nicely done! Love to see these kinds of creative writing pieces from the community. Can't wait to see what you come up with next!
  • Scarcity27Scarcity27 Member Posts: 1,906 ★★★★★
    Hammerbro_64 said:

    Scarcity27 said:

    Thank you guys!

    Rookiie said:

    *snaps fingers*
    I got goosebumps man, you're brilliant
    Can you make one for Cosmic Ghost Rider?

    Will try next week...got my finals till Thursday
    Nice poem! For sure focus hard on your finals though
    Thank you! And yes, I will.
    Glassback said:

    Lovely acrostic mate!

    Thank you!
    TheManMythLegend said:

    This is the most beautiful thing anyones ever done for me 😟 great piece of art

    Aw thanks!
    HeroBoltsy said:

    Very nicely done! Love to see these kinds of creative writing pieces from the community. Can't wait to see what you come up with next!

    Thank you!
  • GhostboytjieGhostboytjie Member Posts: 2,359 ★★★★★
    I Looked through the future and saw 16,000,405 different Scenarios...


    And How many was the poem awesome


    All of them
  • Scarcity27Scarcity27 Member Posts: 1,906 ★★★★★
    Ghostboytjie said:

    I Looked through the future and saw 16,000,405 different Scenarios...


    And How many was the poem awesome


    All of them

    Thank you!
  • Hector_1475Hector_1475 Member Posts: 1,794 ★★★★★
    This seems fitting too:


    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=r9dWsSYStRM
  • Darkhero_25Darkhero_25 Member Posts: 97 ★
    Scarcity27 said:

    Iron Maiden


    ~Scarcity27


    Mysterious maiden, cloaked in blood
    Oh, tell the tale of your fate confined
    Ruthless monarch, mystical blade
    Now leave your mortal days behind
    Iron tomb she wears, she bears
    No soul she leaves unseized
    Gruesome horrors await her foes
    Sadistic revenge of this beast
    Torrid wasteland, she sets ablaze
    Abysmal energy she commands
    Run, run, escape her sword
    Terror consumes these empty lands
    How can one survive her wrath?
    Enemies of this entity flee
    Masters of the sword unite
    Years of silent pain set free
    She nevers stops, never bleeds
    Time has come for your demise
    In Languria a boneyard beckons
    Curses rain in a city of lies
    Queen Haasen, your fury flows
    Under the dusky red sun
    Eternal fire, eternal snow
    Every nightmare into one
    No one survives, no one
    _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

    Hey,
    I love writing poetry. It is just one of those things I feel like I was always meant to do. I love flowing words, the dynamic, the fine line between reality and fantasy I can create.
    And I love to challenge myself.
    So I decided to write a poem inspired by an MCOC character, namely : Morningstar
    I haven't used her much, but I was inspired by @TheManMythLegend 's absolute obsession of her.
    So this poem is sorta dedicated to him, I guess.

    Hope you enjoyed

    I know there is an extra line in the poem. I did this on purpose. Why? Well, read the first letter of every line
    Truly fascinating.....keep up 👍
  • LeNoirFaineantLeNoirFaineant Member Posts: 8,672 ★★★★★
    Nice work!
  • Lvernon15Lvernon15 Member Posts: 11,598 ★★★★★
    Rookiie said:

    Any fans of the band here?

    Yep, thought it was gonna be an off topic thread about them lol
  • Scarcity27Scarcity27 Member Posts: 1,906 ★★★★★
    Darkhero_25 said:

    Scarcity27 said:

    Iron Maiden


    ~Scarcity27


    Mysterious maiden, cloaked in blood
    Oh, tell the tale of your fate confined
    Ruthless monarch, mystical blade
    Now leave your mortal days behind
    Iron tomb she wears, she bears
    No soul she leaves unseized
    Gruesome horrors await her foes
    Sadistic revenge of this beast
    Torrid wasteland, she sets ablaze
    Abysmal energy she commands
    Run, run, escape her sword
    Terror consumes these empty lands
    How can one survive her wrath?
    Enemies of this entity flee
    Masters of the sword unite
    Years of silent pain set free
    She nevers stops, never bleeds
    Time has come for your demise
    In Languria a boneyard beckons
    Curses rain in a city of lies
    Queen Haasen, your fury flows
    Under the dusky red sun
    Eternal fire, eternal snow
    Every nightmare into one
    No one survives, no one
    _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

    Hey,
    I love writing poetry. It is just one of those things I feel like I was always meant to do. I love flowing words, the dynamic, the fine line between reality and fantasy I can create.
    And I love to challenge myself.
    So I decided to write a poem inspired by an MCOC character, namely : Morningstar
    I haven't used her much, but I was inspired by @TheManMythLegend 's absolute obsession of her.
    So this poem is sorta dedicated to him, I guess.

    Hope you enjoyed

    I know there is an extra line in the poem. I did this on purpose. Why? Well, read the first letter of every line
    Truly fascinating.....keep up 👍
    LeNoirFaineant said:

    Nice work!

    Thank you!
  • EdwxnEdwxn Member Posts: 211 ★★
    This is really, really good, man! Keep up the great work!
  • Sarvanga1_Sarvanga1_ Member Posts: 4,157 ★★★★★
    Great poem.
  • Scarcity27Scarcity27 Member Posts: 1,906 ★★★★★
    Edwxn said:

    This is really, really good, man! Keep up the great work!

    Sarvanga1_ said:

    Great poem.

    Thank you!
  • WayntosWayntos Member Posts: 607 ★★

  • Thicco_ModeThicco_Mode Member Posts: 8,852 ★★★★★
    i thought this was a thread about the alliance Maide or whatever but this is a pleasant surprise. Really nice poem!
  • Scarcity27Scarcity27 Member Posts: 1,906 ★★★★★
    Thicco_Mode said:

    i thought this was a thread about the alliance Maide or whatever but this is a pleasant surprise. Really nice poem!

    Thank you!
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